Essay Outline 3

1.       Introduction= TAG (Title, Author, Genre)

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on

B.      Hatchet

Hatchet, a novel written by Gary Paulsen, is about a thirteen-year-old boy named Brian who is stranded in the Canadian wilderness.
A) Hatchet is novel written by Gary Paulsen there was this kid who was stranded in the forest he is fighting for survival.
B) Cast Away is a movie, there was an older man who was also stranded in the forest he is also fighting for his survival he had a friend named Wilson.

C.     

Cast Away is a film about a man named Chuck who is stranded on a tropical island.

D.      Thesis

a.       Both Brian and Chuck use survival techniques to face their challenges.

2.       Similarities= Two things that are the same that Chuck and Brian do

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on

B.      Hatchet similarity (2 sentences)
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Brian and Chuck used a fish spear is to catch his food so he wont die fBrian and Chuck both decided to live after attempting suicide to themselves. Brian started cutting himself with his hatchet. Then Chuck tried to hang himselfrom hunger.

1.       Introduction= TAG (Title, Author, Genre)

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on

Brain and Chuck are stranded in the forest. Its gonna be really tough because they need to find and water and shelter to survive.

Survival in the wilderness is challenging.  Or   Being stranded in the wilderness can be scary.  Or The difference between life and death in a survival situation can be not losing hope.

B.      Hatchet

Hatchet, a novel written by Gary Paulsen, is about a thirteen-year-old boy named Brian who is stranded in the Canadian wilderness.

C.       Cast Away

Cast Away is a film about a man named Chuck who is stranded on a tropical island.

D.      Thesis

a.       Both Brian and Chuck use survival techniques to face their challenges.

2.       Similarities= Two things that are the same that Chuck and Brian do

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on

B.      Hatchet similarity (2 sentences)

a.       Quote (author, page number, “ “)

b.       Explanation (tell me why the quote is important)

C.      Cast Away similarity (2 sentences)

a.       Paraphrase (in your own words, name of film)

b.       Explanation (tell me why you included this)

D.      Conclusion= wrap it up. Finish the comparison

3.       Differences= Two things that are different that Chuck and Brian do

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on

B.      Hatchet similarity (2 sentences)

A) Chuck was stranded in the forest so he wanted to find a comfortable place to sleep so he found a cave and slept in it.
B) Brian was also stranded in the forest as well Brian decided to make himself comfortable since hes gonna be there for a while, so he build himself a shelter it leaned near a rock like a club house.

a. Quote (author, page number, “ “)

b. Explanation (tell me why the quote is important)

C.      Cast Away similarity (2 sentences)

                                                             a.      Paraphrase (in your own words, name of film)

                                                             b.      Explanation (tell me why you included this)

D.      Conclusion= wrap it up. Finish the comparison

4.       Conclusion= Final thoughts

A.      Restate your thesis: Brian and Chuck both use survival techniques to face their challenges.

B.      Any final thoughts, comments, comparisons (2 sentences)

a.       Quote (author, page number, “ “)

b.       Explanation (tell me why the quote is important)

C.      Cast Away similarity (2 sentences)

a.       Paraphrase (in your own words, name of film)

b.       Explanation (tell me why you included this)

D.      Conclusion= wrap it up. Finish the comparison

3.       Differences= Two things that are different that Chuck and Brian do

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on

B.      Hatchet similarity (2 sentences)

a. Quote (author, page number, “ “)

b. Explanation (tell me why the quote is important)

C.      Cast Away similarity (2 sentences)

                                                             a.      Paraphrase (in your own words, name of film)

                                                             b.      Explanation (tell me why you included this)

D.      Conclusion= wrap it up. Finish the comparison

4.       Conclusion= Final thoughts

A) Brian and Chuck made it out a live. When they saw a bunch of food. It felt weird to them because they have been trapped in a forest and haven't seen food for so many years. So its all new to them.
A.      Restate your thesis: Brian and Chuck both use survival techniques to face their challenges.

B.      Any final thoughts, comments, comparisons (2 sentences )




                                                         Hatchet

Hatchet is novel written by Gary Paulsen there was this kid who was stranded in the forest he is fighting for survival.Brain and Chuck are stranded in the forest. Its gonna be really tough because they need to find and water and shelter to survive.
Brian and Chuck used a fish spear is to catch his food so he wont die. Brian and Chuck both decided to live after attempting suicide to themselves. Brian started cutting himself with his hatchet. Then Chuck tried to hang himself from hunger.Brian and Chuck made it out a live. Brian and Chuck were saved they made it . If they didn't kill themselves they did all that for nothing. When they saw a bunch of food. It felt weird to them because they have been trapped in a forest and haven't seen food for so many years. So its all new to them. Brain and Chuck started to give up on themselves. They didn't believe they were gonna make it out alive like know one was gonna find them. They decided to kill themselves.

3/3/17

Gary Paulsen mixed the past into the present because he want us the readers to get an idea what was brains life in the past how did he end up becoming brave and a survivor. Brian had to fight for his life because if he didn't he would be dead. Brian learned how to build a shelter, hunt for food, survived the moose attack. He gave himself confidents he never gave up on himself. The Author told us about Brian's past because how it was in the city and how it is in the forest. Man vs Self , Man vs The Wild.


I'm different because I used to get in trouble, get into fights, get into fights with my sister. I don't like the past I'm love the present because I changed I'm not that person anymore, I don't want to be that person. I live with my grandparents I've changed I have good grades I don't need to back to that life. My teachers help me succeed I know with my teachers and parents help I can go to a University.