Thursday, May 18, 2017

Jazmin Valdez
123 YOUR STREET
YOUR CITY, ST 12345
(123) 456-7890
NO_REPLY@EXAMPLE.COM

Skills

Problem Solving

Adaptability

Collaboration

Strong Work Ethic

Time Management

Critical Thinking

My skills are Leadership. I learned Leadership from teachers, my parents. I lead my team to success. I tell them good job or try next time. I give my team confidence.

Activites


Sports teams, girl scouts, baby sitting, clubs you're in
I plat soccer my team is called Orcutt Crusaders. My team is like my family we go to tournements together.

Education

Expected Year of Graduation:  June 2019

Pioneer Valley High School

675 Panther Drive
Santa Maria, CA, 93454
(805)922-8203

Awards

Honor Roll, Silver Award,  E gale Award, Panther of the Quarter (dates)

Refection
Teacher's name, Some you worked for, A coach

Wednesday, May 17, 2017

05/16/17

My dream job is well I have a lot of things I want to have a job, I want to be a writer, artist, cop, teacher. I want to be all those things. I love to be a teacher because I love kids and I want them to be a success for person they want to be. I love to be a writer because I like to write a lot like my family I have my own journal so I could write everything I feel. I just cant stop writing I want to write my own book one day. I love to draw I like to draw Disney characters. Drawing is my passion. I cant go one day without drawing. I'm going to be a cop one day. I go to the Santa Maria Police Department because I want to be a cop. They are getting us ready. I've been there for like 3 or 4 months. I got accepted to being a cop and now I'm a Santa Maria Police Department Explorer. I was so excited to be on of them now there training us to go to a competition. One of those are my dreams job.
  


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Tuesday, April 25, 2017

04/25/17

What you think it means to be responsible adult in the ''REAL WORLD"
To be RESPONSIBLE is to get and to keep a job so you can support yourself or for your kids. Keep your word, don't say ill so something but you don't do it. That's what adults have problems with is keeping there word. Pay bills on TIME, so you can keep your house have food and support your kids.
Admit to your mistakes and apologize adults do the right thing. be the bigger person. Adults always have a plan to there life they think a few steps ahead.






Monday, April 10, 2017

My Life 11/17/16



         Hello I'm Jazmin Renae Valdez, I have 3 sisters and 3 brothers and 3 nieces and 2 dogs. I have a full house. My favorite sport is soccer, I maybe want to play soccer when I grow up or a teacher. My goals are trying to go to Stanford University or I want to be a writer or a teacher. I always think that, I'm not gonna make any of those like I cant accomplish them. my brother just had a daughter her name is Mia she's the most beautiful baby. My sister had a son his name is Malachi, she lost it, it died in her tummy her boyfriend kicked her in the stomach. Its not the first time he hurt her. I'm so scared why does she keep going back to him. She doesn't realize that he hurts her. She can do better she always goes out with guys that hurt her. It hurts me to seeing her cry and hurt. My tia told me what happened to my sister and I started crying. The first thing I said did albert hit her. She told me he killed the baby. I started crying Malachi will always be in my heart.

To Malachi: ILL HOLD YOU IN MY HEART UNTIL I COULD HOLD YOU IN HEAVEN.

My life is horrible I don't live with my parents anymore. If I behave and don't get tardies or absences or don't get called into the princeable office. I get to go home. Ive been doing really good lately.

Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Essay Outline 3

1.       Introduction= TAG (Title, Author, Genre)

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on

B.      Hatchet
Hatchet, a novel written by Gary Paulsen, is about a thirteen-year-old boy named Brian who is stranded in the Canadian wilderness.
A) Hatchet is novel written by Gary Paulsen there was this kid who was stranded in the forest he is fighting for survival.
B) Cast Away is a movie, there was an older man who was also stranded in the forest he is also fighting for his survival he had a friend named Wilson.
C.     
Cast Away is a film about a man named Chuck who is stranded on a tropical island.
D.      Thesis

a.       Both Brian and Chuck use survival techniques to face their challenges.

2.       Similarities= Two things that are the same that Chuck and Brian do
A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on
B.      Hatchet similarity (2 sentences)
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Brian and Chuck used a fish spear is to catch his food so he wont die fBrian and Chuck both decided to live after attempting suicide to themselves. Brian started cutting himself with his hatchet. Then Chuck tried to hang himselfrom hunger.
1.       Introduction= TAG (Title, Author, Genre)

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on
Brain and Chuck are stranded in the forest. Its gonna be really tough because they need to find and water and shelter to survive.

Survival in the wilderness is challenging.  Or   Being stranded in the wilderness can be scary.  Or The difference between life and death in a survival situation can be not losing hope.
B.      Hatchet
Hatchet, a novel written by Gary Paulsen, is about a thirteen-year-old boy named Brian who is stranded in the Canadian wilderness.
C.       Cast Away
Cast Away is a film about a man named Chuck who is stranded on a tropical island.
D.      Thesis

a.       Both Brian and Chuck use survival techniques to face their challenges.

2.       Similarities= Two things that are the same that Chuck and Brian do
A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on
B.      Hatchet similarity (2 sentences)
a.       Quote (author, page number, “ “)
b.       Explanation (tell me why the quote is important)
C.      Cast Away similarity (2 sentences)
a.       Paraphrase (in your own words, name of film)
b.       Explanation (tell me why you included this)
D.      Conclusion= wrap it up. Finish the comparison

3.       Differences= Two things that are different that Chuck and Brian do
A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on
B.      Hatchet similarity (2 sentences)
A) Chuck was stranded in the forest so he wanted to find a comfortable place to sleep so he found a cave and slept in it.
B) Brian was also stranded in the forest as well Brian decided to make himself comfortable since hes gonna be there for a while, so he build himself a shelter it leaned near a rock like a club house.
a. Quote (author, page number, “ “)
b. Explanation (tell me why the quote is important)
C.      Cast Away similarity (2 sentences)
                                                             a.      Paraphrase (in your own words, name of film)
                                                             b.      Explanation (tell me why you included this)
D.      Conclusion= wrap it up. Finish the comparison
4.       Conclusion= Final thoughts
A.      Restate your thesis: Brian and Chuck both use survival techniques to face their challenges.

B.      Any final thoughts, comments, comparisons (2 sentences)

a.       Quote (author, page number, “ “)
b.       Explanation (tell me why the quote is important)
C.      Cast Away similarity (2 sentences)
a.       Paraphrase (in your own words, name of film)
b.       Explanation (tell me why you included this)
D.      Conclusion= wrap it up. Finish the comparison

3.       Differences= Two things that are different that Chuck and Brian do
A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on
B.      Hatchet similarity (2 sentences)
a. Quote (author, page number, “ “)
b. Explanation (tell me why the quote is important)
C.      Cast Away similarity (2 sentences)
                                                             a.      Paraphrase (in your own words, name of film)
                                                             b.      Explanation (tell me why you included this)
D.      Conclusion= wrap it up. Finish the comparison
4.       Conclusion= Final thoughts
A) Brian and Chuck made it out a live. When they saw a bunch of food. It felt weird to them because they have been trapped in a forest and haven't seen food for so many years. So its all new to them.
A.      Restate your thesis: Brian and Chuck both use survival techniques to face their challenges.

B.      Any final thoughts, comments, comparisons (2 sentences )




                                                         Hatchet

Hatchet is novel written by Gary Paulsen there was this kid who was stranded in the forest he is fighting for survival.Brain and Chuck are stranded in the forest. Its gonna be really tough because they need to find and water and shelter to survive.
Brian and Chuck used a fish spear is to catch his food so he wont die. Brian and Chuck both decided to live after attempting suicide to themselves. Brian started cutting himself with his hatchet. Then Chuck tried to hang himself from hunger.Brian and Chuck made it out a live. Brian and Chuck were saved they made it . If they didn't kill themselves they did all that for nothing. When they saw a bunch of food. It felt weird to them because they have been trapped in a forest and haven't seen food for so many years. So its all new to them. Brain and Chuck started to give up on themselves. They didn't believe they were gonna make it out alive like know one was gonna find them. They decided to kill themselves.









Friday, March 3, 2017

3/3/17

Gary Paulsen mixed the past into the present because he want us the readers to get an idea what was brains life in the past how did he end up becoming brave and a survivor. Brian had to fight for his life because if he didn't he would be dead. Brian learned how to build a shelter, hunt for food, survived the moose attack. He gave himself confidents he never gave up on himself. The Author told us about Brian's past because how it was in the city and how it is in the forest. Man vs Self , Man vs The Wild.


I'm different because I used to get in trouble, get into fights, get into fights with my sister. I don't like the past I'm love the present because I changed I'm not that person anymore, I don't want to be that person. I live with my grandparents I've changed I have good grades I don't need to back to that life. My teachers help me succeed I know with my teachers and parents help I can go to a University.

Tuesday, February 21, 2017

2/21/17

JazminValdez
Mrs Twenge
5th
2/21/17


Dear Brian

 I just want to tell you that ,what your mom did was horrible and she's really sorry. But it doesn't change the fact that we love you so much.  I love we love you. Lets go outside and fix this.
I would feel that I lost my son. I wouldn't know were he landed. I wonder if his mom is worried. I love you Brian. I would tell Brian it will be ok we love you and if he's ok. I would ask him if he's hungry because I might be. I would never let him go home. I would never let him go on an airplane.